~ Expiry ~ Date ~ Comments

well the expiry date is a unique perspective i like your sincerity to bring the point across....nice work keep it up

Quite a different angle of view.. That gives special attraction towards this piece of work...

nice, we all do have an expiry date but we are kept blind about it...we would not work then thinking time was almost over etc etc

human events do expire as well but are too fleeting to be labeled especially Love ~ Hate Benevolence ~ Greed Ecstasy ~ Agony Optimism ~ Pessimism Wedding ~ Divorce original and laid out so nicely, I liked reading this poem. you have a unique perspective

Niv, everything you mentioned in this poem, plus many others, all have expiry dates. When God takes us home, that date is final here on earth, only to begin a beautiful beginning with Him. Good Write, enjoyed it.

To know your expiry date would prevent you from trying

niv, This is a good write....provocative in thought, leaving the reader to think what else to add or delet from 'Everything has an expiry date'.I strongly believe in the concept.... you and I our laughter and smile when it hits the fan expiry has no best before date.. Enjoy the read. Thanks for sharing. Blessings. Leonard Dabydeen

niv, This is a good write....provocative in thought, leaving the reader to think what else to add or delet from 'Everything has an expiry date'.I strongly believe in the concept.... you and I our laughter and smile when it hits the fan expiry has no best before date.. Enjoy the read. Thanks for sharing. Blessings. Leonard Dabydeen

niv, This is a good write....provocative in thought, leaving the reader to think what else to add or delet from 'Everything has an expiry date'.I strongly believe in the concept.... you and I our laughter and smile when it hits the fan expiry has no best before date.. Enjoy the read. Thanks for sharing. Blessings. Leonard Dabydeen

Powerfully conveyed poem!

nice willingness to have an expiry date for certain things but truly its the outlook.. we can't really have everything at our own will.. or so as to say human demands never have an expiry date and nor do our emotions or else great works like this one would not come up.. nice and a different theme... nice write

Short words, strong effects. Truly modern.

i see your point... well expressed poem

Because life and death is usually natural.

Everything has expiry date Medicine ~ Polypacked Blood Transfusion Kit ~ Transfusion Fluid Disposable Syringe Male / Female ~ Contraceptives i-Pills and so on… innovation is there with a support of rich idea and meaningful way of expression..which is some how indirect but much is there to conceive..well done

I think u r the trailblazer of 'modern poetry' and ur poems wont have an expiry date i suppose :)

i marvel at your observations. marks 10 shan

Good poem Niv and let me please add one more, abortion-Birth. Keep up the good work. Lynn

Ne’er ending culmination E’er going contemplatio........yes with some exception...lovely....10 read mine sixth ton... new start

I just love it. Write more please.