Friday, May 27, 2005

Expired Imagination Comments

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crunching on freshly fallen leaves,
a child aimlessly searches for some form of
i m a g i n a t i o n,
yearning to coil his mind like a wire-
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Keith Gaboury
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Raynette Eitel 27 May 2005

This seems a cynical look at imagination. I assure you that all the THINGS children have or do not have will not squelch their imagination. All they need is love and a listening ear. I'm quarreling with your premise. Your poem is very well written. Raynette Eitel

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