Sunday, October 2, 2005

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I held his hand, and glanced at him,
He said his eyes were growing dim,
His breath was shallow, and hardly there,
This moment that we both could share
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 06 April 2008

How sad but how touchingly beautiful. Great write, Andrew x

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Duncan Wyllie 01 April 2006

A pray of peace for a loved one at times like these is like a candle lit within the soul.Love Duncan

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Emma Johnson 10 March 2006

A very moving poem. Susie.

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Uriah Hamilton 03 October 2005

Even when life is beautiful in the sunlight, this day is coming.

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Ghada Shahbender 02 October 2005

Sensitive, beautiful and painful. G.S.

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Wanda Bailey 02 October 2005

Very nicely written...and understandable.

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Wanda Bailey 02 October 2005

Very nicely written...and understandable.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 02 October 2005

Very nicely written! I like this a lot! Thanks for sharing, Ernestine. L

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