Wednesday, October 18, 2017

Experts Edit Muskaanteree Comments

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Teree hulkee phulkee muskrahat......
jaan kitnoe ka legee.......

kya ilm hain kisseee koe bhee....
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Varsha M 24 August 2020

Teri halki see muskurahat Jane ketnoon ko karegi ghayal Kya ilm bhi hai aapko Kitne ke jaan kurbaan ho chuki Bas tere ek muskaan se. Na jane kab aur kaise Hum be ho gaye fida Teri uss muskaan pe. Jaan to hum bhi chidakte hai Aapke uss kemti muskaan pe Jo na jaane kab meri jindagi ban gaye... Tried to make your poem look little more better with this editing as requested.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 June 2020

read it or I wll be removing it lol guys hold on to your fries ok flys

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