Experts Edit Muskaanteree Poem by me poet yeps poet

Experts Edit Muskaanteree

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Teree hulkee phulkee muskrahat......
jaan kitnoe ka legee.......

kya ilm hain kisseee koe bhee....
kitni jaane hain ley chukee.....
teri muskaan aoouron kee....

bun gayeee hai jaan...
maann ya naa maan...
aaj sey hum bhe hogaye
aapkay mehmaaan....

lenee hai to laylo sahee...

abhhe aouron kay saath humarre jaan bheee...
abhee jee
hahn abhee hee....KINDLY EDIT IT ANYONE PLEASE.

Wednesday, October 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: appreciation,love and life,poetry,smile
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 24 August 2020

Teri halki see muskurahat Jane ketnoon ko karegi ghayal Kya ilm bhi hai aapko Kitne ke jaan kurbaan ho chuki Bas tere ek muskaan se. Na jane kab aur kaise Hum be ho gaye fida Teri uss muskaan pe. Jaan to hum bhi chidakte hai Aapke uss kemti muskaan pe Jo na jaane kab meri jindagi ban gaye... Tried to make your poem look little more better with this editing as requested.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 June 2020

read it or I wll be removing it lol guys hold on to your fries ok flys

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