Tuesday, June 28, 2011

Experiment In Pountoun-The Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

The dream I had continues to torment.
The passion of it fills me with such fear.
I wonder where such dreaming finds its birth?
The thought of it sends shivers down my spine,
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Tracy WatsonBrown
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 28 June 2011

Fantastic poem. Wonderfully conceived. I liked it for its remarkable imagery and decent style. Rated it 10. TFS..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Regards Akmal

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