Monday, June 26, 2006

Experiencing Love Through The Senses Comments

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The smell of old newspapers,
That reminds me of dad,
The taste of juice,
That my love has had.
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Aisha Sherazi
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Brian Dorn 06 July 2006

Aisha, you've certainly stirred my senses... 'lovely' examples of each of these remarkable gifts. Well done! ! Brian

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Will Barber 29 June 2006

This is very beautiful in form, sound, and message. You arouse all five senses with black-and-white pixels on a virtual page. And a sixth - love itself?

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Preeti - is here! 26 June 2006

Awwww....this poem is so cute. I cannot imagine life evn w/o one sense. Aisha, love this pome too. Preets

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Aisha Sherazi

Aisha Sherazi

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