Wednesday, July 25, 2007

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My hand on the car door latch.
I think of opening it and jumping out.
My feet treading across a bridge.
I think of pushing myself over the railing.
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Ellie Watts
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Micheal Udenyi 27 July 2007

excellent rethym. keep it up.

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Michelle Ma 25 July 2007

nice rhythm to the poetry

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Ellie Watts

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