Monday, June 24, 2013

Expedition To An Unknown City Comments

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here, I am now resting besides the graves of my memories
and plucking black flowers grown to their ugly chests
and with a spade, digging the hole to grab all the soil
to rewrite my past, although knowing thats quite impossible.
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Vishal Sharma
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~ Jenie~ 25 June 2013

past memories hurt agreed dear poet

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Sandra Kelley 24 June 2013

a beautiful poem, I wish I could change my past as well

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Poetheart Morgan 24 June 2013

This city... your memories? Digging inside you? Such pain that rest in a young poet heart t. Sad and beautiful.

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Survi Sharma 24 June 2013

hey, what a write vishal nicely written amazing for your age

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