Expecting The Deserted Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Expecting The Deserted

Rating: 5.0


My eyes have been strained
setting on the road bend
So as to behold thy image
Alas! umpteen times
They have mistaken
The wayfarers for you

Tonight too I will keep warm
Your favourite food that I cooked
As I have been doing all these years
It's too late in the night
I can't sleep unless you come
And fed with my hand once again

the old lantern with a dim light
Is hung at the doorway
and the door is shut unbolted
Gently come in and go to the dining
If you find me slept
Never wake me up

It will be a sleep I can never wake from
It's a consolidation of sleeps I skipped
Every night since you left
Your dad had left a word for you
To stand at his grave for a while
So that he may see you from within it

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Boys who desert their parents never think of the pain of the old hearts. Forgetting all the odds the old parents live to welcome the deserted.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 05 February 2021

A heartfelt expression. Sir you are right when we fail to take care of our parents well. The argument is never ending. We need to behave sensible and compassionate.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 February 2021

Tonight too I will keep warm Your favourite food that I cooked....I admire the poet's emotions filled expression! A beautiful love poem...5 stars!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 06 February 2021

A deeply emotional poem waiting for the child to come back home. Beautifully penned -the agony and anguish of the parent.The

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 February 2021

Poignant reflection of different facets of love and affection

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 February 2021

Here I find the love of parents for their diserted children

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M Asim Nehal 08 February 2021

A profound poem. As you sow shall you reap...Balance sheet will tally in the end.

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Aarzoo Mehek 07 February 2021

The longing to embrace their children is far too strong to understand the journey the children go through to secure their future. Never ever abandon your parents and run after this materialistic world. Both need to balance the need to fullfill eachothers needs. Touchy poem.

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 February 2021

Kids are away in search of opportunities. nothing wrong as the time demands. A very heart touching poem.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 07 February 2021

for tat! if I avoid the looking after of parents then it's fixed for me that future child of me will surely avoid looking after me!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 February 2021

The poet brilliantly unfolds the pain of love

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