Thursday, August 27, 2015

Expecting Rain On A Busy Day! Comments

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Hazy Sky leaving no room for blue colour
Whole day town is drowsy under shade!
Usual business does not stop anywhere;
But nothing in particular touches all sure!
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Ramesh T A
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Bharati Nayak 27 August 2015

Hazy sky leaving no room for blue colour Whole day town is drowsy under shade Usual business does not stop anywhere But nothing in particular touches all sure - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - A sense of relief once in a while comes so, if If rain comes on a busy day and drenches all.- - - -Only a lovely rain can can uplift the spirit that has been dull and drowsy. Nice flow of words the poem is full of promise for a lovely rain.

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Ramesh T A 27 August 2015

Thank you for your nice comment on my poem, my friend!

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Ramesh T A

Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India
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