Friday, January 30, 2009

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She spoke the words
I wish that werent true
But I knew it was just a matter a time
Before his lies fell through
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Payyton Egerstaffer
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Wow, this poem is written from a very heart-and-emotional perspactive, with strict and hurting words, directed to make the reader feel. it is a wonderful poem, written from within. sadly i wish you didnt have to feel such thoughts and emotions. your words hurt, and so does the message, and that is what makes the poem great, by portraying it so fully. nicely written and expressed in such simply words.

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Payyton Egerstaffer

Payyton Egerstaffer

Fort Polk, Louisiana
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