Friday, December 22, 2017

Expectations And Reality Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sitting and dreaming of a sexy life
After a couple's daylong old age strife
Evening was even more boring
Having no alternate of outing
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Khalid Saifullah 23 December 2017

Enjoyed this amazing limerick.....................................................

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 December 2017

...Evening was even more boring.....A brief poem yet very Animated! Thanks dear sir for sharing....10

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Indira Renganathan 23 December 2017

You make us think and think and mostly smile...I would say reality is beautiful than expectation....great poem

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Bradley Howington 22 December 2017

What a lovely poem! 10+++

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