Tuesday, February 11, 2014

Expectations And Facts Of Past Comments

Rating: 2.5

Shadow that spread around
Darkness that hide the meadows
Long way of unknown spark
Nonsense thoughts that wreck the heart
...
Read full text

COMMENTS
Salini Nair 11 February 2014

thanks but it happened.will try for simple lines

0 0 Reply
Ahmed Abomahfouz 11 February 2014

although it was hard to read the poem because of difficult words (i translated more than 15 words) but it is logic to paint the hard sorrow with hard words. i also liked to appreciate the past even if it is painful..suffuring makes the true heroes. the poem is very good + 8 / 10

0 0 Reply
SALINI NAIR

SALINI NAIR

kottayam
Close
Error Success