Thursday, October 25, 2018

Expectations Comments

Rating: 5.0

You want love without expectations,
To curb the longings you dare not hope,
But they flutter within you,
Butterflies emerging,
...
Read full text

Elizabeth Hefty
COMMENTS
Alvaro Cuesta 25 October 2020

I agree, and rather live having no expectations, but I do believe it is important to have hope. Good poem!

0 0 Reply
Chinedu Dike 03 December 2019

Insightful utterances set aside for honest reflection. Focused and factual. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

0 0 Reply
Dr Antony Theodore 28 October 2018

But they flutter within you, Butterflies emerging, Trying to break free unchain you from your prison; the feeling of love expressed so well i n a very poetic way. thank u. tony

0 0 Reply
Beth Hefty 25 October 2018

The poem was written not about myself, but for someone very close to me who is afraid of expectation. I wish him to free himself of those fears. He is far too brave a soul to live such a way.

0 0 Reply
Dr Antony Theodore 25 October 2018

release you into the world of dreams. So fight expectations if you must, Butterflies in the stomach.......... never be negative. i would advice you. please remain in expectation and in hope........ why should u regret when u live in faith and in hope. only good will happen to you.... thank u. that should be the attitude in life. tony

0 0 Reply
Elizabeth Hefty

Elizabeth Hefty

London, UK
Close
Error Success