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The air scent heavy with the morning rain
As tall as the cathedral spire looking to heaven.
Tumbling out of the sky in big dollops falling
To the ground forming puddles.
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Man is in eternal quest after the meaning of life and the riddles of existence! Man can only turn to God in Heaven perhaps for a better vision of life! Enjoyed the poem!
It's a spiritual write, men seeking guidance and bliss in bowing before God, very vivid imagery that helps to form a picture in mind.
I quote the following for your own poetry in which you are always Looking for the meaning of life in all its complexity And seeking answers to their existence.
Oh, so nice. A softer rain that kissed your face like a sprinkling of Holy Water That is beautiful! Loved it!
Excellent write David, very philosophical and inspired. Enjoyed reading.
At the cathedral - Looking for the meaning of life. Beautiful poem. Thank you.
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8/4/2025 12:00:51 AM # 1.0.0
In a show about particle physics, I heard a comparison of cathedrals to particle accelerators. But a comparison to tall ships- very original, I think! Great job. Wonderful metaphor too.