Thursday, February 15, 2007

Expectations Comments

Rating: 5.0

Looking in the mirror
Wishing I could disappear.
Everything I see I hate
But there is no way of changing fate.
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Hannah Davies
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rachael richmond 15 February 2007

heyyy, stop looking in the mirror and wishing you were someone you ain't......do you think those stick insects with empty heads could write poetry this well? nahhhh...... be yourself, girl. rachael

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Michael Gale 15 February 2007

I cannot believe that there was no comment here for this poem? Yes i agree. Wht should looks really matter? I don't think that models should be that skinny as that will cause alot of teenage girls to starve themselves to death. Prime example is Karen Carpenter the singer that died of anexaria or whatever the spelling is? I gave ya a ten here kind woman of the write. God bless all poets-MJG.

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