Expectant Mother Comments

This poem makes happy for the loving couples cherishing their children and for mothers who have the huge privilege to live in a certain degree of harmony. This poem makes me sad when I think of the many mothers who decide (or have to decide) to give away the fruit of their womb. It makes me even more sad when I think of those unborn lifes prematurely taken out to be thrown away. If I think about the many women who are desperate to get pregnant but do not receive this great gift from our Creator, I feel for them too. Dear Louis, great poems tend to evoke lots of emotions and this one definitely did in me. Good work.

she is gentle-yet strong-meek yet bold. she is a woman to behold. she is a expectant mother as we can see. waiting for her child to be set free. would be mother but still mother and so respectable for us.. beautiful write....10 read mine o.mother..mom i miss you

This is so touching, great work! Really places the reader (me) in the perspective of the mother. amazing.

I love this poem it speaks well for the mother you have this down to the point great work.. Thank you for sharing

I think you have gotten Mother hood and Child down just perfectly. Ten for you on this one. God Bless, Linda