Saturday, October 29, 2005

Expatriation Comments

Rating: 4.4

It was no use.Same old shit.
The trap was, just like last time
all set to grab, to ruin things.
He had fallen that one time
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Allan James Saywell 29 October 2005

WE'LL NEVER KNOW WETHER HE PULLED IT OFF OR NOT BUT I LOVE FELLOWS WHO SIT IN BARS TO ME IT IS A MEASURE OF SUCCESS WITH THE PRICE OF GAS AND BEER AT THE MOMENT WARM REGARDS ALLAN

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Charles Chaim Wax 29 October 2005

a gritty tale with good spice and truth

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Raynette Eitel 29 October 2005

Well Herbert, how does a doctor down under know about a hot and dusty place called Nogales? I loved especially the last stanza. You captured the life of a guy who pulled it off. Raynette

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 29 October 2005

Living on the lam huh? Nice write! !

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