Thursday, February 22, 2024

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Rating: 5.0

Eyelids peel away
Pupils enlarge
Neural synapses open
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Falling Awake
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Sandra Feldman 29 May 2024

The emotional build up thru verse and feelings is fantastic and so strongly felt. The reader reaches the poetic climax with you. Well done! ! !

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