Sunday, July 31, 2016

Expansion And Contraction (5-7-5 Haiku) Comments

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Valsa George 02 May 2017

The whole life compressed into a haiku from birth to death! Great write!

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Thank you Valsa for the comment.

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 August 2016

Life and death! ! ! Born on earth; and to die on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Imagine kind of things we do between these two events. Thanks very much for your comment.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 17 August 2016

Exactly Geeta, Let all beings realize this fact of life and act wisely. Thanks very much for your intellectual view and the comment.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 10 August 2016

The truth exposed in few meaningful words. According to Hindu Dharma, death is not a destination. It is a part of the eternal cycle of birth, death, rebirth. It is only the body that will lie in the casket, but the soul flies out of the body to a new space or body.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 August 2016

Very amazingly the truth is spoken in few lines. This completely says about life's ultimate truth. Wisely penned....10

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Thanks very much Kumar for your hearty comment.

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Christopher Tye 01 August 2016

Really nice Haiku, life and death is the eternal cycle of existence.

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Let all beings live knowing this universal truth. Thanks Chris for your comment.

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M Asim Nehal 01 August 2016

The ultimate destination of all humans.........Dance with pride till you are alive and death will give you dust to bite...10+++

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Anyone has the freedom to swell oneself any amount. But, at the end, all hat will be shrunk to be carried in a casket. Thanks very much for you comment.

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Kelly Kurt 31 July 2016

I wish to left in a field to decompose and feed that which I fed on my whole life

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Good thinking Key. After all, all this is nature. What is borrowed from nature has to go back to the nature. Thanks for the comment.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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