Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Saturday, March 5, 2022

Expander 05: War Comments

Rating: 5.0

War.
Ugly.
Terrible.
Unforgiving.
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Kim Barney
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3) Your poem is most relevant, when we have Christmas at our doorstep once again. This season calls for peace, but we have more madmen around!

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2) And an enticing form of poetry, the expander! I loved it.

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Kim, this is a beautiful thought. Let peace be! But madmen "happen" on earth every now and then.

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Grace Diane Jessen 18 December 2023

Well done! A timely comment on the world. I've just finished re-reading 'The Boys in the Boat' about the 1936 Olympic games in Berlin. Your poem made me think of that.

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Koffi Sossou 08 September 2023

We are all concerned. Let's take actions together and let PEACE be.

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Hope Mills 09 May 2023

Somebody apparently made an assassination attempt by drone on the madman the other day. Too bad they didn't succeed.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 April 2022

Praying for those who have gone too soon, children who are separated from their parents and men who joined soldiers to defend their country. To my Poem List

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 April 2022

A powerful poem in a wonderful poetic form. The madman is brilliantly depicted in this great well crafted poem.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 07 March 2022

Exceptional work. Marvelous idea to 'expand' the poem in this manner.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 07 March 2022

Marvellous Poem Kim.......May peace return! .......10

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 06 March 2022

Not just one madman, a whole lot is there. The one who attacked and those who provoked. Let better sense prevail.

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Susan Williams 06 March 2022

5 stars of course

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Susan Williams 06 March 2022

I pray the world responds to the needs of Ukraine---to let this generation's Hitler start taking over countries one by one like Hitler did will lead to concentration camps and horrors

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David Wood 05 March 2022

We seem to be stuck with him. My worry is who will take over from him. Another madman?

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Kim Barney 08 September 2023

The world is full of madmen for sure. Thank you for commenting, David.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 March 2022

May peace return shortly to the earth......I love this sincere prayer.

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Kim Barney 05 March 2022

Thank you for the comment, Dillip.

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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