Expander 02: Autumn Pleasures Comments

The pic is wonderful

I am just wondering, what will happen to my iPad, if you chose to write a poem of thousand lines!

This poem is captivating. And expander format too. I am just wondering, if

Wow! I think this is the best of your Expander poems so far! Great picture, too!

All my efforts are in vain! Poem Hunter has added the soundtrack anyway. Why do they torment me like this?

Hmmm I have never written a poem in which each line has an increase of one syllable hmmm course there is always the problem of rhyming and something else hmmm

Kim, very nice. I rate a 10

Nice picture! You can hike down the poem, but watch out - the wildlife step is a killer!