Exotic Dancer Comments

I agree with Hans VR. Beautiful poem

A very nice contrast is imbedded in the poem between the moments of fame on the dance floor and the real life. The poem is very well written, good choice of words. Excellent!

Wow! What an exotic and well crafted write my dear Trinidad! I love its smooth flow and catching imagination making me feel like I am actually in one of those special places for exotic dancers! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! I truly enjoyed this amazing write! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City