Wednesday, June 22, 2005

Exotic Club Comments

Rating: 4.6

I spend most of my time alone,
Moping around listening to music,
Depressed and brooding,
It is a garment
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Uriah Hamilton
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Dee Daffodil 05 March 2007

Uriah...The first five lines tell much...a garment you've grown comfortable in...like a favorite sweatshirt that your friends and family would like to see you throw out, because it's threadbare in spots...but you don't want to...because it's...comfortable. Hugs, Dee

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Ebone' Ingram 01 January 2007

aww now you're making me sad... it's amazing, full of expression and an intense dominant emotion. i like the metaphor in the beginning. wish i could write this well. eni da kid

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