Friday, December 25, 2009

*exit Doesn'T Exist.... Comments

Rating: 3.4

looking for the exit?
My friend, dont try...
the passersby will laugh
for they had tried it all
...
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Vaibhav Pandey
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 30 December 2009

marks 10. the nicest and the richest. happy new year. shan

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Kesav Easwaran 28 December 2009

life is like a casino show...at the exit one is infact made to re-enter...the truth on this darkness has been brightly presented...and that too in beautiful words...10

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 27 December 2009

death with salted tears expressed very well...mercury rising and pulse falling...the body dies down

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C. P. Sharma 26 December 2009

Great metaphysical poetry. CP

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 25 December 2009

very deep and engaging write. always enjoyed your work. thank you.

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