Existence, the effort of will 生きる（いきる) = 頑張り （がんばり） Comments

To live in love is the cardinal wish of every individual and a mother's warmth to the baby is like sunshine to the plants without which it will die! Enjoyed reading! !

a beautiful weaving of how we start to love one another! Nice to read!

A mothers love is what all children want, and what all mothers want to give. A great poem.

You get a ten from me. Ha Ha! !

Oh my god! Elena, that is fantastically written. the baby needed to be touched to melt into smile with not only skin but also heart.

you have filled this poem with all richness & positivity...