Existence Of God Comments

a soothing verse... choice of words or the diction is really effective and fitting with the thought..... rhymes are spontaneous........ and in Susan's language the use of dichotomy....is very powerful to lead a reader to drag to the last word gladly and enthusiastically.......

God exist where love exist, even beyond all emotions statement, He closer when heart is searching...but far when we denying...to me He never gone, but it us that ignore. Nice poem!

lovely emotions. beautiful poem.

Very well said.. Where the love exist without any prediction There the God exists without any hesitation Beautiful write. Where there is love and devotion, life will flow beautifully. I loved each lines.

Where there is love, devotion and absolute submission, there dwells God! When we are ready to believe in His existence, He clears all obscurity and reveals Himself before us in all transparency! Great write, Ramesh ji!

I quite liked the where/there and when/then dichotomy in your poem. It adds vibrancy and strength to the verses. Very well written, my friend. I enjoyed this very much.

And when the soul sinks with full devotion Only then will man put God to work, for his own good! Thanks for sharing, Ramesh!