Tuesday, July 28, 2015

Existence Comments

Rating: 4.5

A shadow playing at being a man,
So long, that he forgets, what he is,
A poor rendering of a true life
An insubstantial copy of the true original
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roger jones
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M Asim Nehal 24 January 2019

Superb Poem...Nicely written.

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Chinedu Dike 01 August 2015

A shadow has no substance. Nicely encapsulated poem depicting state of hopelessness and life at its lowest ebb. A lovely piece bristling with insight. Thanks for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 29 July 2015

Powerful! I know exactly what you mean. Thanks for sharing, Roger

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