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Hasmukh Bhai, in the first two stanzas you have gone back to the Vedic period. People of that era had thought exactly as you are doing now. They composed 'Parjanya' hymns to please Varuna and Indra. As your verse continues it becomes some kind of shower. KH Prabbu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343 Apr 08,2014

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We are all puppets and the divine ring pulls the string. Beautifully said. Thank you.

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hope and pray for best end, thanks sir.

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existence Dominic Wong2 minutes ago I like it.It is so beautiful, and i want to creat a good poem like this.

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