Friday, June 29, 2012

Existence Comments

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Yes somewhere a tear rolls down the cheek,
Of yet another him or her or them pursuing,
The nirvanic dream of which so many speak,
With echoes trapped deep in sounds ensuing;
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Godfrey Morris 09 July 2012

This is a lovely write. Good poem.

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Iniduo Iniduo 05 July 2012

If life's a quest than have no question ever answered. Very nice poem.

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Marieta Maglas 03 July 2012

you're right, in a way, the ''nirvanic dream'', as you wrote here, is the search for the lost Eden in the rebirth, but Jesus is the way, the truth and the life, a hope to be with The Lord.

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Allemagne Roßmann 03 July 2012

Existential beliefs coronated, curvatured, connived and conjectured.In all it deals with the objective to achieve nirvana within and somehow learn the etiquettes of co-existence.I enjoyed reading this one.Thanks for inviting.

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Chitra - 30 June 2012

great work..unfolding layers of deep thoughts....so much to learn and imbibe-poetic beacons

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Saadat Tahir 29 June 2012

classical good rhyme...great context nice write...loved reading it :)

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