Existence Comments

spiritualy chalanging....well written lines...... conveys the dielema of existence well.. cheers

This poem is of anguish…funneled to God or Beloved I think….though there is doubt…still the say is direct and from heart…ailing...angishing one… Where such queries are just and apt… ‘am I foolish to fight the greatest? , ’…here I sensed that…you’re in quest for answer…from Highest… ‘ your magic and force verified, /powerless I am then why my soul fights, ’… Well knock the door till it opens’...Jesus….life is but contemplation and resultant action to be taken…indeed a poem on blues…still flutters the heart… thanks sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10