Monday, July 22, 2019

Exhilaration Comments

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Belle Wassermeister
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Deluke Muwanigwa 22 February 2021

Exhilaration! top of the mountain there is nothing above me except for the sun Below is a fountain Sending pure water to sea So much fun Exhilaration!

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Sandra Feldman 26 July 2019

Three, very well written lies of absolute frankness BRAVO! .

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Kostas Lagos 26 July 2019

You've got it all! The feeling, the image, the air...you really transferred us to a mountain top

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Carl Roussell 24 July 2019

You can feel the serenity in your words!

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Susan Williams 23 July 2019

Oh, my! ! ! ! You nailed the heartbeat of exhilaration in so few but well-chosen words. 10++++++++++++++++++++

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Susan Williams 18 August 2019

You should be! ! ! ! Ah-ha! ! I figured it was you Linda Bella although tomorrow you may put on another mask- -Zorro, perhaps? Whatever, I am enjoying your poetry!

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Kim Barney 23 July 2019

This is a very nice haiku, Jungle Cat. I like it!

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Gleichen, Alberta, Canada
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