Sunday, March 25, 2007

Exhilaration Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pressing down
Thrusting down
Hand gripped tight
Downwards
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Patricia Gale
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Very naughty Patricia but very nice. I have a similar one about a spinning top. Your words and images are so free flowing after the let down. A very clever piece of writing. Karin Anderson

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Francis Duggan 06 January 2008

Another very good poem here Patricia up to your usual high standards

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Paul Butters 12 May 2007

As our late great comedian Eric Morecambe would say, 'There's No Answer to That! ' Naughty but neat. Paul.

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Melvina Germain 25 April 2007

You naughty lady, what do you think I was thinking, Excellent Patricia --Melvina--

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