Exhibition Dancing Ii (The Tango) Comments
She coaxed him into lessons
With a tug on his sleeve
And a kiss that tasted of
Dark bitter chocolate—
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Glorious read! I can feel the passion of Piazzolla, see the staccatto of feet and necks jerking, remember the surrender into strong arms and a firm pelvis. 'Hallogen white' works beautifully and your final surprise is perfectly placed to change the gear of the piece and leave the reader wondering... love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Wow what a twist for an ending. Very energetic and imagistic. I liked it very much.
Wow, does that ever bring back memories. I love dancing, and the intensity of the passion. I love the twist you put at the end, it ended the poem quite nicely. It might leave one with some questions, and I like that. It made me miss dancing even more. I lost my partner to an accident last year. Anyway, fabulous job. Best Wishes, Corrine Andrews
Mmmm.....nice! I felt the rythm...in this most sensual poem - with a twist! Yeowza.
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7/19/2025 12:49:20 PM # 1.0.0
Wow! What an intense, passionate and sensuous write; and that unexpected line at the end!