Friday, January 15, 2016

Exhaust Comments

Rating: 5.0

Words and abundance
Red ribbon, how triumphant
Looks like this area's marked
Different after the dark
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Mike Mendoza
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Howard Savage 10 September 2016

Great poem of the realities of life. When you have given it your all nothing is left.

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Weldon Davis 15 January 2016

Loved your poem rated it a 10...My fav line was A baby begins life you end mine with a lie..I can relate to that statement whole heartedly

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