Monday, August 25, 2008

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Life isn’t simple
Nor is it a breeze.
Life is a purpose
and was meant to be seized.
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April Swanson
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Emily Oldham 05 October 2008

i love this poem! i'm glad you didn't say 'Life has a purpose' it sounds so much better as 'life is a purpose'. you are so right! keep writing, thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***

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