Thursday, December 1, 2005

Exercise Your Mouth Comments

Rating: 4.6

As I Exercise my Mouth
Moving Lips North and South
There are no words coming Out
No Bad Words
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David Darbyshire
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Ernestine Northover 01 December 2005

Words will come to you........ if you're like me it's usually in the middle of night, when I've no pen or paper by my bed, and you don't want to wake up your other half. Trouble is, by the morning it's gone completely from your brain. Writing poetry can be hard sometimes. I'll do some thinking for you, now isn' that kind. Love Ernestine XXX

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Stefano Felici 01 December 2005

every poem is a thought, two thoughts, three thoughts. there's not better or worst. i like this poem. (but I talk like a candy-child)

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Tiyler Durden 01 December 2005

I know you can do better than that Dave.....

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