Exercise.... Comments

Hope you had a nice holiday! Nice feelings. Nice work

An emotive poem. Assertive powerful words. beautifully constructed

I agree with Poet, Hans, Jr the recurring lines.in the poem make it lovelier and more fascinating. Great rhyme and imagery.

A fascinating poem that vividly depicts the wonders and beauty of pristine snow. It also brings out the power of God through the beauty of His creations: nature.

Beautiful. The repetition gives a special touch to the poem. Good!

A heartwarming poem! Well done!