Sunday, November 4, 2012

Excuses Comments

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When I'm with you,
Everything feels right.
When the night ends,
I want to go back to the beginning.
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Adriana Sofia
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Sara 05 November 2012

Sometimes we make excuses to hide, even if that means hiding from our own happiness; I completely understand this poem and the message. Good poem!

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Margaret Haig 05 November 2012

Life is like that. Sometimes the male population don't use their brain to listen, Great poem keep it up. We're you affected by the weather with sandy. Great name to call it, look at the way a lot of streets had the sand everywhere. Hope you didn't lose your home, Look in my list of poems I wrote a prayer poem for you good folk in USA God would look after you all. Meg.

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