Friday, August 17, 2007

Excuses Comments

Rating: 4.0

here in my garden
of so called eden
are roots and seeds
planted by uncertainty
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cathy clough
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Stan Pelfrey 27 September 2007

Very nicely done. I wasn't sure where you were going with it, love gone awry? choices regretted? and then WHAM! ! at the end. Great job.

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Broken Peaces 21 August 2007

Not all gardens are easy to manage, nicely written [ 9 ]

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