Like a naive fool, I chose to believe
...that your word meant something & you'd never leave
So THIS fool-in-love gave her heart for a chance
...
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Love EXcUSED been there. Keep up the great woork give it a 10.
This is your first (and so far the only) poem that I have read, and I must say that I am quite impressed. Each of the seven couplets is an outpouring of your heart. No doubt that you were badly hurt, particularly the last couplet says so, but yet you are subdued and decent in your expression. That's what I liked the most about this poem. The title of the poem is great, 'Excused'! You have neither used the word in the poem, nor said in the poem that you have excused him. Was the title an after thought?