Excuse My Absence Comments

i searched for inner peace, only to find emptiness in the end---this is nice, i don't know why i like it, sometimes i feel empty and i can't figure out why.

brilliant poem my friend, shows a lot of honesty and true feelings nicely set.

I told you I would give myself… You just didn’t believe how unconditionally… Readers also can't. They live in the world of conditions. If the child cry, mother will feed. From the very beginning of life-cycle begins the condition. But as we know, love is the unconditional surrender, you have uttered it openly. But the receiver....is he ready to believe it Or are you really prepared to give such way beyond life! Not emotionally, rationally! Anyway, poem is impersonally personal, so writing is beautiful. Magnificent excuse of absence.Thank you.....write more.....filter our conscience...... 10/10 Regards, pranab

A very sad and moving poem, Kevin. I could see a lot of my former self in these lines. Nicely done.10+