Excuse Me, Ms.God? Comments
Are you in the lightness of feathers
Or the wind that makes them dance?
Are you in the wings of the birds of flight...
Or the wind or water that helps them glide?
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GREAT WORK................KEEP IT UP! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Amazing. Beautifully written Well penned Enjoyed reading it.
profound...the stanzas r linked nicely....keep up the goodwork :)
Still the quest prevails..but I know where to find you nowhere but here in your words. very well written...
Very well thought out, I hope you can answer your own questions. you simply did not leave anything to chance. Did you? What an interesting and a bit overwhelming production. I liked it!
excellent.. brilliant.. i must say i have been overwhelmed... breathtaking poetry... perfect job 10++
'...Or the after-thought of the next octave? ...' Simply … Well words baffle me. But as reader something to be said, ‘Nothing remained unaddressed’ More such we’re looking to read from you and Ten+++ Regards, dr. sakti 12.08.09.
simply amazing. I love it. it reminds me of the things I wish I could write.
beautiful. very nice, i liked it. great write.
wonderfull.... i am reminded of Mahakavi barathiyaar.... in some places....no words aaryaan....
Cigar packets display the warning “Smoking is injurious to health” Multinational companies increase their earnings We loose our body and wealth All smokes inhaled in the lungs Life and death always hangs How much damage it causes? Health danger definitely it pauses As cigar turns into ashes Life is also turned into ashes No amount medicines may wash Nothing will help either money or cash Thousands of deaths every year Advice to stop may fall on deaf ear We may hate to heed or hear Later on all brunt we may bear Even chewing tobacco leaves Harms more and endanger lives We hear but not land ears or believe Ends it with grave damage then relieve Limit it to self for occasional use Excessive use amounts to misuse Harms may be more than the advantage Youth may be on wane and early old age It is not piece of advice Happiness key and simple device Use it to safe and simple way Life may be joyful and have your sway, , , , , HE is omni present and every where....10 read mine lord......prayer ....
nice verses you have here..This is great..a well crafted piece.
wowww beautiful so many questions? but in the end I hope you got ony one answer yes I AM THAT lovely compostion -10 ANJALI
the seaech for the omnipresent holy divine is always on...we seek him everywhere...well written poem 10+
WOW! ! ! What a fabulous compositions so manay questions and doubts in all angles and sides...well structured and formed in quatrain verses...Thanks..........10/10
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7/22/2025 7:46:53 AM # 1.0.0
Questions about God's presence. Beautiful.