Saturday, December 6, 2014

Excuse Me I Am Blind Comments

Rating: 5.0

On the doors of my heart,
I wrote sweetheart,
Trespassers will be prosecuted,
But the order was rejected,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Salini Nair 09 December 2014

nicely crafted poem....like it

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Neela Nath Das 07 December 2014

It is a melodious song rather.87883

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 06 December 2014

Oh this is very sweet penned brilliantly........thanks for sharing....10/10

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Khalida Bano Ali 06 December 2014

An amazing Short Poem, loved it.........10

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Valsa George 06 December 2014

So she trespassed into your heart against all prohibitions and you generously forgave her! Yes, laws are quite flexible! Really enjoyed!

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