Thursday, May 26, 2005

Excursion Comments

Rating: 4.5

Don't go out again tonight,
to walk the streets alone.
Don't follow train-tracks til dawn's light,
That will not lead you home.
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James Atkins
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Ernestine Northover 19 October 2005

What a pleading poem, beautifully explained situation. Sincerely Ernestine Northover

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Sallie Howson 06 June 2005

scary.... well done...

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Jarmara Black 26 May 2005

Very Powerful! I like it alot.

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