Tuesday, July 22, 2014

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Few lines designed Exclusively for the second last page!
When I lost all my desires and hope to live.
Life is now pulling me back into its illusionary web.
Especially tempting me with lucrative offers
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Valsa George 02 August 2014

At the end of a tortuous journey, you have come with a comical conclusion! While reading the poem I was in a different mental make up! But the end has really relieved me! But I must say comical is the twist, Geetha! The poem has some powerful images! !

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Amitava Sur 23 July 2014

Geetha - considering this as a fun write even, I would like to say... A BELATED VERDICT IS VERDICT DENIED . IT'S NOT A VERDICT AT ALL. Chill... just for fun I wrote... Ha Ha.

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Salini Nair 23 July 2014

When you gave wings to fly Why did you kept me caged ever? .................agrahikmpol kittathathum avasyamillathapol kittunnathumaya onnanallo jeevitham...............you wrote it in the full verve with fun..............like it

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Geetha Jayakumar

Geetha Jayakumar

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