Friday, January 25, 2008

Excitment Comments

Rating: 5.0

Excitment-
It fills your body within seconds-
It makes your heart beat faster and faster and faster-
It just makes you want to SCREAM!
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Elizabeth Tews
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William Jackson 09 March 2008

The poem makes the reader want to know what is going to happen to the speaker in two days.

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Mary Gordley 25 January 2008

You manage to deliver that excitement in your writing. It makes the reader excited for you as well. Thanks.

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