Thursday, April 9, 2009

Exciting Love. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love can be heightened in quite awesome ways.
Boredom's indicted as pleasure finds voice.
Laughter is medicine, smiles can re-phrase
Definition of love as we make choices.
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Fay Slimm
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Deva De Silva 16 April 2009

lovely poem on love as we all know it...

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Fiona Davidson 09 April 2009

Excellent write of the excitement of love Fay....Fi 10++

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Very beautiful indeed. you have have chosen a fantastic aspect of love and the other elements to write this piece

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Catrina Heart 09 April 2009

Love's pleasuring is what keeps alive Excitement, and helps hearts to revive. ---------- Excited as I am with your lovely and sweet little poem..........10

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Tsira Goge 09 April 2009

Fay, Very lovely poems, with graceful hope...10...... Tsira

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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