Saturday, October 21, 2017

Exchanging Hearts Comments

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By the way, if you can't see what I see
I know you have blue eyes and I have black,
But the human eyes are meant for the vision,
Let us exchange and see what we lack.
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Valsa George 23 October 2017

Love and friendship are two different things....! A good friend needn't make a good partner! A very imaginative write!

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Savita Tyagi 21 October 2017

Seeing the world from somebody else's eyes definitely changes one's out look. In matters of love it can really create some better understanding.

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Khalida Bano Ali 21 October 2017

And when the exchange of hearts was reverted I am the same and you are the same, only a friend I am satisfied and so is my heart but my black eyes! Any how I'm stopping but tears they intend! Beatiful lines, a lovely poem.

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